I can lay sum drums and sfx down

send the flp. I'll send it back, then you can master it. Im "liberated" at mastering, then idk you can even change the drum soundz if u want. I like the melody though it's got that uneasy feel to it that makes you not want to stop listening to it lol.

My only problem

It waz just too short. Do you have a song length version?

Throw a damn right in there

Yup. You need ad libs bro. No offense, but it didn't have any lyrical dynamix 2 it. Add effects 2 your voice as well.